This poem spiralled out of the blue

On July 1, 2021September 22, 2022 By Sunra RainzIn Art, Creative Blog, erasure poetry, photography, Poetry, Writing

^{_{Erasure Poem 4, (Sketchbook 2021) gel pen on photocopy paper, © N Nazir 2021}}

^{I will love without you.

Do the years help my fortune?

All my demonic selves need no words.}

9 thoughts on “This poem spiralled out of the blue”

filipamoreiradacruz

Feeling blue Nina? 💙 Time heals (almost) everything.

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July 1, 2021 at 2:24 pm Reply
1. Sunra Rainz
  
  I’m okay, chick. Hope you are too. Thank you for your positive energy ❤️☀️
  
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  July 1, 2021 at 2:48 pm Reply
  1. filipamoreiradacruz
    
    You may count on me. ❤
    
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    July 1, 2021 at 2:50 pm
  2. Sunra Rainz
    
    😘💕
    
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    July 1, 2021 at 2:53 pm
loujen haxm'Yor

Very interesting and creative display of verse.
Art

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July 3, 2021 at 8:24 pm Reply
1. Sunra Rainz
  
  Thank you, Art! Appreciate your comments 🙂
  
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  July 3, 2021 at 8:32 pm Reply
Benjamin Grossman

What an opening line! That really has such a great mystery to it. Seems like a powerful stance to take. Cause sometimes I think: “I’ll never love again without you.” I like the alternative view. Awesome.

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July 3, 2021 at 11:33 pm Reply
1. Sunra Rainz
  
  I know what you mean. I’m not sure what I was thinking at the time. I let the lines show themselves to me. Thank you for your considerate thoughts ❤
  
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  July 4, 2021 at 12:16 am Reply
  1. Benjamin Grossman
    
    You did a marvelous job. It’s cool how each person sees something different. And I just simply adore all you see. Your view is really stunning!
    
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    July 4, 2021 at 2:05 pm