I slip through the sliding door
into la salle d’attente
and wait to be called
to be told
one way or another
if I’ve made it out of limbo.
Blue meets yellow
makes heart chakra green.
I read lines from my past life…
You can read the rest of the poem here.
N Nazir 2021
Such heartfelt thanks to Visual Verse anthology for publishing my poem this month ❤ You can read all the other poems here.
Most excellent! Congratulations!!
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Dear Manja, thank you so much ☀️ I was pleased. However now I know you’ve had four publications with them I must also try and join the club! 😂
Please forgive me, I haven’t read them yet. I wanted to give them quality time when I have a moment and then comment properly. This weekend has taken me as it’s ox 🙄 🐂😄
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Ohh, please, in your own sweet time. I read them again when I went there to get the link for you. I must admit that I wouldn’t recognise half of them as my own.
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Congrats again! This is an thoughtful piece. Has that surreal sense to it.
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Thanks Ben!☀️ Appreciated 💛
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Welcome! 💛 🙂
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Love your description. Well deserved publishing.
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Thanks so much, VJ ❤️
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You are welcome
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I thought I’d read a poem or two of yours here or there, and alighted here…Sunra, your poetry is just so good…the tension here is stunning…and the lines ..the limbo…gave it ever more of an intensity. That a poem like this should be published is a given. So good.
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That’s so kind of you to say, Ain, thank you! ❤ Lovely that you popped by to read and even more so that you got something from it, appreciated 🙂
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Congratulations and that last line got me! Very well crafted.
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Thanks so much, Punam! 💕 Appreciated☀️ Sometimes that’s all you can do ☀️
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You are so welcome. Indeed so. 💞
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the waiting room is just that, waiting. I once wrote a poem for a friend waiting for her exam results, she was nervous. I love it.
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Thank you, ayiekosami ☀️
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Oh this is beautiful.. Love it… Congratulations Sunra 💖👏
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Hey Bernie! Thank you so much ❤️ ☀️
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Congratulations! I couldn’t access your poem from the link, but I like what you posted.
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No worries, Merril. It’s because they’re adding the new image so the website isn’t accessible until then. Feel free to check again at your leisure and the link should be working again 😊
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