Thanks so much, Ingrid! No, not at all! ๐ My handwriting is usually an illegible mess but it was in my sketchbook so I made an extra effort to write a little neater! Thank you ๐
Such a fun read, and the side-words make me think of someone as crazy as the catfish greeting it formally as it’s dragged from it’s watery domain to a nearby stewpot. It seems a pity to interrupt its fandango with such a prosaic end, tho. What can I say except so long, and thanks for al the fish…and all the words.
Haha! I learned in school that when someone says this do you, you reply exactly the same. So I sometimes change it into Do you how how? You did this wonderfully, pleasing to the eye and soul.
That’s so funny, Manja! I never learned such a thing at school. It’s true, they say the same thing back in Oscar Wilde films or such-like. Do you know how? is a great response ๐. Thank you for your kind words โค๏ธ I’m so glad.
Ha! I forgot I got it! After this comment I started and read till 2 am. And today again. The Arabic part is a bit blaaah. But will see it to the end, I think.
Yes, I know. It has to explain all of the villain’s backstory to explain motive, etc. but it does drag on! I’m easily pleased so I enjoyed it despite its shortcomings but you might think it as bad as the Da Vinci Code! ๐
Sunra Rainz 
Suberb stuff….Such a clever play with words but in fact a real delight for the mind reading.
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Thanks so much, Ain! Glad you enjoyed it ๐
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I love it! ๐๐๐๐
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Thank you, Chica! ๐โ๏ธ
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ยกMuy bonito! โค ๐
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Clever endletter acrosticโบ
Much๐love
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Thanks Gillena! ๐
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This delights my every sense!!!!!
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Thank you, Helen! ๐
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I love this! Especially the idea of ebbing and flowing like deja vu ๐ Gorgeously done ๐๐
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Thank you, Sanaa! I appreciate that! โ๏ธ๐
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Love the playfulness and invention of this! JIM
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Thanks so much, Jim! โ๏ธ๐
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Delightful, Sunra. I enjoyed the playful language in your poem.
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Thank you, K.Hartless! I appreciate that ๐
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I love the form and presentation of this poem: an artwork in itself! Did you study calligraphy?
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Thanks so much, Ingrid! No, not at all! ๐ My handwriting is usually an illegible mess but it was in my sketchbook so I made an extra effort to write a little neater! Thank you ๐
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LOL! Mine too ๐
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Fun one. ๐
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Thank you, Selma, my dear! ๐โ๏ธ
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Always a pleasure. ๐
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Such a fun read, and the side-words make me think of someone as crazy as the catfish greeting it formally as it’s dragged from it’s watery domain to a nearby stewpot. It seems a pity to interrupt its fandango with such a prosaic end, tho. What can I say except so long, and thanks for al the fish…and all the words.
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What a wonderful comment, hedgewitch! I imagined a scene from a children’s book then! ๐ Thank you ๐
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LOVE this rambling and very fun poem! ๐
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Thanks so much, Lillian! ๐๐
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Delightfully done! โค๏ธ
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Thank you, Punam! Hope you are well! โค๏ธ
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Haha! I learned in school that when someone says this do you, you reply exactly the same. So I sometimes change it into Do you how how? You did this wonderfully, pleasing to the eye and soul.
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That’s so funny, Manja! I never learned such a thing at school. It’s true, they say the same thing back in Oscar Wilde films or such-like. Do you know how? is a great response ๐. Thank you for your kind words โค๏ธ I’m so glad.
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Do you know how is even better than Do you how how. ๐
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Oh! I don’t know why I always misread things! Honestly ๐. It does work though. How are you getting on with I Am Pilgrim?
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Ha! I forgot I got it! After this comment I started and read till 2 am. And today again. The Arabic part is a bit blaaah. But will see it to the end, I think.
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Yes, I know. It has to explain all of the villain’s backstory to explain motive, etc. but it does drag on! I’m easily pleased so I enjoyed it despite its shortcomings but you might think it as bad as the Da Vinci Code! ๐
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It sure goes into one’s head! Today I thought of the book so often and I was on a trip!
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A most interesting poem. I love your questioning thoughts here!
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Thanks so much, Dwight! I appreciate that ๐
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You are welcome!
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Such a delight–Hello back to you!
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Thank you, Merril! ๐
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how you manage to build that acrostic and wrap epic images in between are just beyond me. the fandango-ing catfish. ah!
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Thanks so much, areadingwriter! It was an experiment but I do enjoy them ๐ Hope you are well.
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I really like your double acrostic poem, and your handwriting is beautiful, almost hypnotic.
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Thanks so much for your kind words, revivedwriter โค๏ธ Hypnotic! Wow. My writing is so messy usually, I appreciate that! ๐
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Hi Sunra
How do you do? ๐ฅด
I really enjoyed your fun play on words.
Ann
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Hi Ann, good, thanks! ๐ Appreciate your kind words. Hope you are well ๐
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I am well:)
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