Denim Blues

Perhaps you ought to
try out a new groove.

The truth is
I was only pretending to like
your blues solo.

But I didn’t get
what the funk it was all about.

None of it
made me tremolo.

© N Nazir 2021

Written for Sammi Scribbles Weekend Writing Prompt: Blue, 38 words.

*This is an old poem I chiselled to meet this word count. The original is quite different.

14 thoughts on “Denim Blues

  1. Yeah, this one comes with the soundtrack! I like! (Since I didn’t get almost any feedback on my entry to this challenge last week – except yours, Not Pam’s and one other person’s – even though I read them all, I decided not to do it again. No matter how tempting 38 words sound.)

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