Moonlight watched time
alter the darkness.
The world experienced death
as though it was something
with no moon as witness.
The universe asks questions
of you. Who are you?
Do you feel
the blossoming insistence
of stars?
© N. Nazir 2021
*This one’s pretty messy. I used Tippex to link the words and cover up the text and it got cloggy and rough around the edges, moreso when I tried to paint over it. Not easy to read either. Labyrinthine, even. I created it very quickly in response to a “moon” prompt a couple of months ago, and you can tell!
*And Debussy’s Clair de Lune. Just because.
Nice questions: now you’ve got me thinking! 😅
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Thank you, Ingrid! 💛 Feel free to answer them, as inane or profound as you like! 😊
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Maybe after Christmas 😅
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😄 Any time you want!
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The questions asked here go to the heart of things, and the heart of all we may never know, yet yearn to find out. Thanks so much for the transcript at the bottom, as I would never have pieced it together otherwise.
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Thank you so much, Hedgewitch, for your thoughtful and thought-provoking comments, as ever. Yeah, this one was a mess so it needed the transcript for sure! 😄 Bit of a dot-to-dot!
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I’m a huge lunatic! 🌖 I love your poem! And Clair de Lune! 💜💙
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Oh amiga, I knew it! You are a special kind of lunatic, ha ha! Thank you ❤️ I also love Clair de Lune. I didn’t realise it was Debussy until recently and then of course I wasn’t surprised at all. He’s just the best ☀️
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Claude Debussy is one of a kind amiga! 🎼❤🎵
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I know! Absolute genius. Some days I have him on replay! 😊❤️🎶
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I really love this! And what a last line/question that is. So good!!
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Thank you so much, Bob, for your amazing comment! ☀️☀️ I’m delighted you think so.
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I feel it!
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I bet you do, Shay!! 😂 Thank you 💕
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Ohh, I find it mighty trippy. If you didn’t told us, I’d think it was elaborately manufactured over weeks. Slickly done.
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Thanks so much, Manja! Oh goodness, no, I did it in a day – you are kind! This time I sort of half-thought of the words then tried to find them. Hence, it’s so fragmented! Thank you 🙂
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This is not a challenge I’d take on. I really have no answers!
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Ha ha! Never mind, Keith. Maybe next time 🙂
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“the blossoming insistence of stars” I love this line, Sunra. Wonderful, my dear friend. 💜
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Oh, thanks so much, Jeff! It was rather a choice find, I thank you for picking up on it 🙂
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You’re most welcome, Sunra. Always. Ah, yes, indeed. My pleasure. 😁
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