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NaPoWriMo Prompt: Hard-boiled detective novels are known for their use of vivid similes, often with an ironic or sarcastic tone. Novelist Raymond Chandler is particularly adept at these. Here are a few from his novels:
- A few locks of dry, white hair clung to his scalp, like wild flowers fighting for life on a bare rock.
- Dead men are heavier than broken hearts.
- From 30 feet away she looked like a lot of class. From 10 feet away she looked like something made up to be seen from 30 feet away.
- She smelled the way the Taj Mahal looks by moonlight.
- He looked about as inconspicuous as a tarantula on a slice of angel food.
Today, I’d like to challenge you to channel your inner gumshoe, and write a poem in which you describe something with a hard-boiled simile. Feel free to use just one, or try to go for broke and stuff your poem with similes till it’s . . . as dense as bread baked by a plumber, as round as the eyes of a girl who wants you to think she’s never heard such language, and as easy to miss as a brass band in a cathedral.
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How fun. I’ve never seen a collage poem before. Wonderful, Sunra. 💞
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Thank you, my friend. Really? They’re quite fun to do! I haven’t seen many poets do it. Although plenty of people mess around with those word magnets you stick on your fridge. It’s kind of like that, I guess! ❤
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Very cool again! I especially like the first part.
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Thank you, Worms! I’m really glad you liked it 🙂
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This is brilliant. I love the punk black background, and all the fonts, and semantically the last segment most of all.
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Thank you, Manja Mex! I’m glad you like the aesthetic, I’m a big fan of it too. I’m pleased you like the last section, I deliberately left it unfinished as I couldn’t see what else it needed. Thank you ❤
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Oh, I didn’t think it unfinished at all. For me it comes together just right.
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Thank you!
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❤ X
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Fantastic!
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Thank you, Bob! 🙂
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I have never tried collage poem. This looks interesting, Sunra! 😊
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Thank you, Punam! I just like messing about with things in a very hands-on way, what can I say! 🙂 x
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You do it very well! My pleasure. ❤️
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