The satisfying
thwack
of spoon
on eggshell
make it crack
peel away
the top
reveal the
white mound
ready for
scooping.
Spoon poised
then it goes in
like predator
with prey
struck helpless
and dumb
(Hannibal
Lecter
with one of
his victims)
dip into
the swimming yolk
not quite solid
yellow-edged
raw lava centre
relished on tongue
mmmmmmm
pure protein power
for pint-sized
proportions
I carefully
scrape out
and consume
every last remain
as if I’m eating
a tiny brain.
I admire
the hollow shell
somehow
still perfect
in its emptiness.
Tapering
ovoid
contains
the void.
What more
beatific form
exists
than this?
Nothing.
Nothing
whatsoever.
© N Nazir 2022
Shared for dVerse Open Link Night, hosted by Sanaa.
GOodness…….! Hahahaha! Extraordinary and unique…I felt that and I’m not even an egg! Wonderful verse Sunra, of course…
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Thank you so much, Ain! It was lovely to see you and hear you read! I’m always glad you share with us, your writing is hard-hitting and powerful. Much love and stay safe, my friend ❤
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Nice poem 🥰
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Thank you, Obong! 🙂
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You are most welcome ❤️
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It was so great to hear your read this. I’m both craving eggs and sort of horrified at the same time (that brain image)! 😀
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Thank you, Merril! Sorry about that, ha ha! It had me in mind of that one morning and I thought I’d share it with everyone. At least mine wasn’t the only food horror story 😉
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You’re welcome!🤣
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This is exquisitely drawn, Sunra 😀 I especially love the image of the; “raw lava centre relished on tongue.” Thank you so much for joining in the LIVE session 💝💝
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Thank you, Sanaa! It was lovely to join you guys after so long. You’re most welcome, I enjoyed hearing everyone read ❤
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💝💝💝
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Your reading made a tiny moment suspenseful.
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Thank you, Ken! 🙂
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Yummy Sunra, in an exotic way!
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Thank you, Rob! It was good to see you even if we didn’t get to hear you read tonight ❤
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AHHHH – this is so much my cup of tea! Killer Diller, S to the R. (Also: Ovoid Void is a great band name.)
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Ha ha ha! Thank you, jdoublep! I’m so glad you feel it. Ovoid Void would be a great band name. So if I’m on rhythm guitar, what are you playing? I could do backing vocals if you’re singing? 😀 😀
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Electric triangle, lead keytar, an 808, and mayhap a kazoo run through a wahwah pedal. It would be a delight to sing/scream/intone/growl for The Ovoid Void. 🤘🤘
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😂 Fantastic! Lead keytar!! Oh that would be a delight. The wahwah kazoo would be essential to the whole proceedings. Now I know you’re a growler! Ha ha. But I don’t know what an 808 is. I googled it and it came up with the Beastie Boys. Still, your comment has made my day, jdoublep ☀️
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🙂 This right here will really make your day: https://io808.com
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😀 That was fun, jdoublep! Thank you, I had a good fiddle with that! Though I didn’t really know what I was doing but I got some good sounds out of it 🙂 I’ll have to play with it again some time.
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That’s what it’s for – fiddle (and then lay down some bars, SR!)
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I need more practice with this sort of thing as I really don’t know what I’m doing but I appreciate you showing me this!
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you know – live your best beastie girl life!
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Ha ha! I aim to! You too, JPP 🙂
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Some people aim to live every week like it’s Shark Week. That’s good but too bloody for me. I aim to live every week like it’s So Whatcha Want? Week: “Cool as a cucumber in a bowl of hot sauce…”
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Sounds like a nice combo. I’m not sure what you mean by Shark Week. Is that like going surfing when it’s too dangerous too but you just want to live on the wild side? Or is it being a bit of a gambler in life? Sometimes, life decides things for you if you can’t figure it out yourself. I find I have such trouble making decisions sometimes. It’s got worse as I’ve got older. I need a cure for overthinking!
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🙂 obscure 30 Rock reference: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=U8NxtL-oLm4
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😀 I see!
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Feels criminal this enjoyment of the egg. Something private your poem makes us privy to, and I love this mood you’ve created.
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Ha ha! I know. It’s an old poem I rewrote but it was my thought process one morning so I wrote it down. That’s just my creepy little mind, I guess. Thank you so much, K.Hartless 🙂
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I love it. Glad you let it speak every now and again.
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I love a poem that makes something so mundane, so magical!
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What a wonderful comment! Thank you so much, Xan 🙂
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A cracking poem!
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Ha ha! Most eggs-ellent, Peter!
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It was a very poor yolk!
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But I so enjoy your flash-in-the-pan humour! 😀
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Well, it is almost Fry day!
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😀 😀 My thoughts eggs-actly!!
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All white, no yolk. Off to bed!
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You win! I’m all out of egg puns now. Thanks for the laugh, Peter 😀 Good night!
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Good night!😊
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Marvelous work. I wish I’d been around to hear you read! Can’t wait to watch the vid! Thanks
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Thanks so much, Ron! That means a lot, I appreciate it 🙂
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I’ve just finished watching today’s Live Edition … what a treat to see you, listen as you read this most entertaining bit of poetry!!!
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Thank you, Helen! I’m so glad you found it entertaining! 🙂
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Wow! I could follow this process precisely. Just that I eat a kiwi this way, not an egg. Scratch and scoop and hollow out. Like a brain. 😮 So strong!
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Oh thank you, Manja!! I’m so glad you think it’s strong. As I know you are not easily impressed! I also eat kiwis like that 😀 😀
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Wonderful. How do you do that so well? And how would that egg be feeling? Don’t tell me. 😳
I loved how you kept me glued in to what was happening. A zen moment. Thanks. xo
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Thank you so much, Selma 🥰 I’m so glad you saw it as a zen moment, it kind of was? ☀️ Appreciate you x
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Hi Sunra. So enjoyed listening to your read tonight. Wonderful share.
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Thanks so much, Grace! Shame I didn’t get to hear you read but I’ll catch up with your poem later 💕
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The simplest of beautiful pleasures. (K)
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Thank you, K! 💖 It is indeed. Glad you relate 😊
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That took an unexpected turn at Hannibal L
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😂 I know! Sorry about that. Hope it didn’t put you off the poem entirely! Thanks for stopping by and commenting.
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My pleasure
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I enjoyed hearing your read your poem on the live get together!
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Thank you, Dwight! 💖 Appreciate that!
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I enjoyed this deliciously sinister take on eating an egg, Sunra: especially hearing it read aloud!
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“deliciously sinister” – love that, Ingrid, thank you! So glad you liked it 💖 It was a good live session for all.
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I certainly enjoyed it! 🥚
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🙏
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This is what poetry tries to scoop the center of, delicately, voraciously. Bring on the napkins and tubas!
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What a delightful comment! Thank you, Brendan! 😊
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I do love a soft boiled egg in an egg cup! Done perfectly Sunra ☺️
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Thanks so much, Christine! 🙂
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I can’t watch those Hannibal Lecter movies. Too much for me.
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I know! I haven’t seen them for years. It was just an analogy.
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A lovely tribute to a common miracle. Very sweet.
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Thank you, ByteSizedStudio! 🙂
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It was really good to hear you read this poem at the live meet.
Thanks for dropping by my blog
Much💛love
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Thank you, Gillena! 💖 And you are most welcome 😊
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Oh my. Elegantly crafted and wickedly smart. Gorgeous write, Sunra. ❤️
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😂 It’s an old one I rewrote recently. Not to be taken too seriously! Thank you so much for your kind words, Jeff ❤️
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To take the serial killer approach to the eating of an egg is brilliant. True crime at the breakfast table.
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Thank you, Bjorn! I appreciate that! Glad you could see the silliness in it 🙂
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