I am
transported
beyond aerosphere
to starbursts
of promised land
I step into
a celestial vault
explode into
a million moonbeams
no, sunbeams
no, nimbi
where am I
with Pi in the sky
no, some other cosmic abode
with diamonds
no, cherries
no, bijous
in the fat palms of deities
while the band surrender
to the sorcery
of euphonious
third eye plane
ever-seeing
my inner domain
now the trumpet speaks
a conversation
with the brass section
breaks it down
right down
and the brass goes yeah
I feel you
while the piano butts in
but can only agree
as all are one
in the family tree.
I’m in the indigo
underworld
swirling streams
thought bombs
beguile my dreams
while men float
in ether soup
telepath me
in puzzling tongues
the cobra
knows not the answer
yet trusts implicitly
where to go
while the auricle
hears whole
and separate
all at once.
My African dream
spins in the cosmic
orbs of firmament
I’m a little bit
just a tiny bit
closer
to some kind
of seventh heaven
thank you
monkey man
you fathomed
the Sphinx’s riddle
sun god understands
and the divinities
of fluent geometry
sense you rumble
through Geb desert earth
course across
Nut starry sky.
© N Nazir 2022
*Originally written last year for napowrimo poetry prompt for April 1st: to write a response to the animated version of Seductive Fantasy by Sun Ra and his Arkestra. I thought I’d finally share it (unedited) and kill two birds with a Throwback Thursday.
*Shared for dVerse Open Link Night, hosted by Mish.
Just a little bit closer, how delightful
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Thank you, pvcann! 🙂
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My pleasure 🙂
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What a wild ride! I think you translated the video well! 😆💓
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Thanks so much, Tricia! ❤ 😀
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💓
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very interesting. im reminded of Lucy in the sky with diamonds by the beatles, among many other images you evoke here.
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Thank you, erbiage! I totally get the Beatles reference :-).
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An amazing dialogue. Gorgeous language and poem, Sunra. ♥️
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Thank you so much, Jeff ❤ I'm so glad you like it! Hope you are well 🙂 X
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You’re most welcome, Sunra.❤️Always! All is well, and I hope you are too. ☺️X
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🙂 All well, my friend ❤
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Surreal and brilliant. I kept reading, wanting to read more and more.
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Nitin, thank you so much for saying so! I’m delighted 🙂
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Yes yes. I was there for that one. My very first NaPo. I was flabbergasted with that as the first prompt.
Love what you did. Here. Tremendous.
There were farts in mine. Haha. XoXo
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LOL! How did you manage that, Selma?! Now I must root around your posts and find it! Rest assured I shall. Thank you so much for your kind words, they mean so much to me ❤ xx
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You’re kind to me. I bless you.
Here it is.
My rookie first NaPo poem. Burps, Farts and all. Just so you see I was there. Sharing:
https://selmamartin.com/after-big-bang-chaos-paved-the-way-tanka-senryu/
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I loved it, Selma! I’ve left you a comment, my dear ❤ x
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This is wonderful! So much to like about it. The imagery is fantastic.
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Awww, thanks so much, Bob! I’m delighted you think so 🙂
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I read it and thought, this makes no sense. I then listened to the music and it now makes perfect sense and I love it. what a perfect combination! Well done.
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Ohhh thank you, Peter!! I’m delighted you enjoyed it! I think it’s great you experienced it twice very differently, thank you for sharing that with me 🙂
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Immersive reading-good, casual reading-bad!
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Ha ha. Any reading is fine by me! It’s just lovely to have you drop by 🙂
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A colorful, creative ekphrastic fantasy!
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Thanks so much, Merril! 🙂
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I was taken to à jazz club I went to à few times in Baku, Azerbaijan, over 20 years ago…and a ‘date’ I had there! Wonderful poetry, and really fit my memory very well of an evening full of allusions, wonderful repartee and music. Really like the hesitancy of your beginning, leading into deep and exotic geograohy.
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Thank you, Ain! Appreciate you dropping by and I hope life is treating you well. Where are you now? Or is that a silly question? ❤
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You’re very welcome! 🙂
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Wow, thanks for the invite! It was an adventure into unknown dimensions. Loved the indecisiveness in the first stanza. A great interpretation of the video….which was also quite a trip. I saw many images that reminded me of heart valves, ventricles…..strange and amusing.
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Thank you so much for this wonderful comment, Mish! I love how you experienced it 🙂
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❤❤❤
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❤ X
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Feels like riding bareback on a fractal through infinities. Love the music and the notes you composed for the spaces in between the music, Sunra. Would love to hear you read this one.
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Oh thank you for this wonderful comment, msjadeli! It’s a poem in itself! And now I would love to read it at your suggestion ❤ Appreciated 🙂
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My pleasure, Sunra. Your poem sparked it.
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🙂
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Fun piece, so full of colors and mystical images, it feels psychedelic. And the words contain as much music as the piece you write about.
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Thanks so much, Jedediah! Appreciated 🙂
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Oh, wow! Kaleidoscopic write, went so well with the music. You rock, Sunra! 💖
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Hey Punam, thank you so much, my chick! 😀 So pleased you enjoyed it ❤
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Always a pleasure, dear. ❤️
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