The thing about happy baby pose is
it can be a little too relaxing.
So when you’re in a room
full of strangers
relaxing this way
and it’s too cold
to open the windows
pretty soon
you’re not relaxed at all
but in desperate need
of fresh air.
*
I dreamt of city lions
on the crumbling rooftops
of derelict housing in the inner city.
Silent and prowling and beautiful they were
the vocabulary of their manes
a perfectly silvery grey.
How could they be phantoms
when they had shadows?
Shining in the sun,
the shadow-casting sun.
One of them locked eyes with me
as I cruised past
on the bus.
*
Eggshells tinkling
as I punch out
into the new world.
I outgrew this one,
became other.
I heard the hiss of life’s parade
all around me
and knew it was time.
Hey, World!
How come you’re hibernating
when I’m ready to intrude
on your soul?
We can shindig gently
indoors
and it needn’t be loud
nor too wild.
© N Nazir 2022
Written for Shay’s Word Garden where we are given inspiration with Jim Morrison (words used: strangers, windows, lions, vocabulary, phantoms, eggshell, hiss, parade, soul) and Poets and Storytellers United where the theme is the power of 3.
As long as the lions don’t drink from the Thames, it’s probably all good as per the old maxim. Your third section made me think of Joan Jett singing “Hello world, I’m your wild girl!” Then again, not too loudly. 😉
–Shay
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Thanks Shay! 🙂 I like your thoughts behind it. It was just a free write with very little editing. I was in the mood for a poem but didn’t think about it too much. I seem to write more like that these days.
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Lovely writing! Lots of interesting lines there and great imagery.
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Thanks so much, Bridgette ❤️
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I was taken willingly on the three journeys you proffered here Sunra. Each was engaging, especially those lions prowling the rooftops. Quite an image. Fine writing! ✌🏼🕊
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Thank you for this wonderful comment, Rob! ❤ Appreciated!! X
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Wow!!! This was fantastic end-to-end. Well done. Esp this: “How could they be phantoms / when they had shadows?”
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Hey, thanks so much, qbit!! I’m so pleased you think so! 🙂
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A fascinating triptych. I particularly love the lions. Something in the way you wrote of them makes me suspect you do too!
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Rosemary, thank you so much! I’m so glad you liked it ❤
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Wonderful. I really loved the second section. I’ve reread it several times. It’s sublime.
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Oh thank you for this wonderful comment, Bob! It’s the first time anyone has described my work as sublime, I’m delighted! 🙂
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I LOVE the stanza about the lions. What an amazing thought, city lions on a rooftop. A wonderful poem.
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Thanks so much, Sherry! ❤️
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Questions / answers within poems delight me!
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Thank you, Helen! 😍
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Such a fascinating write, Sunra! That unease amongst strangers, lions prowling rooftops, shindig which is not loud or wild…I am having whatever you are! Lol
Very creative and original! ❤️❤️
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Thanks so much, Punam! ❤️ It was more of a brain splurge with very little planning so I might do that more often!! I may have had more coffee than I ought to have! Thank you for your kind words, my dear 💖
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Are you sure it was as tame as coffee! 😂
You are very welcome, my dear. 💖💖
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I’m afraid so! That is just my normal brain at work! 😀 Some days it’s blank too so… 🙂
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Nice! Sometimes I feel that way, like now, open to party as the world is still hibernating.
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Glad it’s not just me! Thank you, Susie 🙂
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Nice use of the given word list. I especially like your lion stanza. “How could they be phantoms when they had shadows.”
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Thank you, Yvonne! 🙂
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I love the easy flow of this, as it prowls and brings its shadow along, through the reader’s imagination, in darkness and in that half-light where music sounds best, that is not too bright, not too wild. All my phantoms have shadows–I guess its just something they come with? Really enjoyed this one, Sunra–sometimes the ones that we write on a glide go farther than one could ever imagine they would.
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Thank you, Joy! I love how you describe the poem, prowling and bringing its shadow along….your whole comment is a poem in itself! Appreciated, my friend! ❤
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