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Finally
we are explorers.
Describe how
it was when
you climbed to the very top
then drank it all in.
Oxygen
fills you out again
expanding
your band width.
Here we make garlands of time.
Yes. It’s a good wind.
*
Chalk it up
to experience
how you caved
to moments
of chasing dreams when dreams were
taken. And yet, oh –
*
Vanilla
vapour seduction
not easy
nor sinless.
It’s just physiology
stealing my senses.
*
The hauntings
the shoulda, woulda
coulda, the
ifs and buts
the is-it-too-late. And yet
a ghost of longing.
*
Point. Focus.
Zoom in. Keep still. Click.
Frozen frames.
Light bouncing.
Moments captured forever
as memory fades.
© N Nazir 2022
Written for Shay’s Word Garden where Shay brings us inspiration with Paige Ackerson-Kiely (words used: explorers, describe, oxygen, garlands, chalk, vanilla, vapour), and We’Ave Written Weekly, hosted by David, where the poet of the week, Sylvia Cognac, invites us to write a Shadorma poem (3/5/3/3/7/5) up to seven stanzas long, (it was on the topic of food but I’ve only just read the instructions properly so that bit didn’t happen, oops).
Shadorm – a – dorable, SR. Thanks
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Thank you, Ron! 🙂 Appreciated.
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Wonderful, Sunra. “Vanilla
vapour seduction” That’s amazing. ❤️
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Thank you, Jeff! ❤ Did I seduce you!? Excellent 😀
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Ah, there’s that Knack song again, “My Shadorma.” My myyy myyyyyyy shadorma!
I think maybe a lot of art is about the preservation of something fleeting–an image, a feeling, a photo, a painting, a poem .
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Absolutely, Shay! And the frustration also of not being able to capture that thing, that quintessence, that you’re trying to, but trying all the same.
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Beautifully written Nina! It nourished my spirit. 🌸
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Thank you, Filipa! ❤ That is all I can hope for! Besitos, amiga Xx
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You did well to skip the food, I’ve eaten too much already!
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Ha ha! Thank you, Peter, you winsome ponderer! 🙂
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Wonderful…I really love the lines,
Here we make garlands of time.
Yes. It’s a good wind.
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Thanks Bob! Those are also my favourite lines. It was a late night free write so the ending’s quite weak, I think? Appreciate you reading 🙂
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The ending is just great. Got to love those late night free writes!
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Hey, thanks!! I know, right? I’m like oh it’s 2am, better get some shut-eye, just a few more lines… 😀
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A wonderful poem – and a glorious photo. What a beautiful view.
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Thanks so much, Sherry! ❤ Not my photo, unfortunately as I don't live anywhere that glorious! Thank you for dropping by 🙂
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Nice shadorma! Technically you did meet the food requirement, since you mentioned vanilla! If I wouldn’t have known, I would have also thought the “drank it all in” line was meant to have a double meaning. Either way, it’s a lovely poem. Nice work.
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Thank you, Sylvia! Then the poem is redeemed! 😀 Really appreciate your kind comments.
I genuinely missed the second part of the prompt. I glanced at it and saw “shadorma” and thought ooh I’ve never done one of those before and set to work. It was only when I went to link it I saw the food addition and thought damn! Oh well 😀
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well, food or not, this is a stunning piece, Sunra ❤
~David
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Thanks so much, David ❤ I messed up a little! Sometimes I have no observations skills! 😀
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🤭
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Lovely snapshots of passion filling the lungs, too easily released, too difficult to recapture: from rapture to a longing half-forgotten memory, how beautifully you describe it, Sunra!
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Thank you, Dora, for this most wonderful comment! ❤ I love your reading of it!
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Well done especially incorporating the prompts 🙂
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Thank you, poetisatinta! ❤️
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So, so good. We are explorers, and yet we and everything is haunted. Hunted?
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Thanks so much, qbit! 🙂
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I love this poem. I can’t find a favorite part, brilliantly written.
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Susie, thank you so much for saying so, I appreciate that ❤
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A set of poems that encourage us to live!
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Thank you, Margaret! ❤
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Exceptional Sunra — even on the food side of the ledger, now I’m craving a vanilla frappe! 😉
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Thank you, Greg! Mmmm, yeah I could do with one of those as well… 🙂
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Sunra, just lettin’ you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the brilliant Britta, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2022/12/07/w3-prompt-32-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy!
❤
David
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Thanks David! I’ll check it out 🙂
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*hug*
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“Here we make garlands of time”—I love this line so much. Beautiful writing.
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Thank you, Bridgette! Appreciated 🙂
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Absolutely love this, Sunra! Missed reading your beautiful words. The detail is insanely touching 🙌🏻🤗🤍
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Thanks so much, Grace! Appreciate your kind words & so glad it resonated with you 🧡🌸
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hi, Sunra! I just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by l’il ol’ me, is now live!
https://skepticskaddish.com/2022/12/14/w3-prompt-33-weave-written-weekly/
❤
David
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Thanks, David, I’ll check it out soon 🙂
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🤗
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❤
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