Momentous, when you falter
and give in. Proximity.
You’re not so rigid
after all, unmasked.
I hold infinitude here
circling and circling. Take it,
my offering. Let’s go
chase some good trouble.
© N Nazir 2022
Written for Sammi Scribbles Weekend Writing Prompt: momentous, 32 words, and The Sunday Muse, image as shown.
Sunra Rainz 
This feels wise and I love your use of words.
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Thank you, Worms! I appreciate that. If I’m honest, I didn’t feel a thing when I wrote this, I was just playing with words. I tend to write stream most days. Here I was like, I’ve got 32 words, that’s 8 x 4. Go! 😅
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🤣🤣 love it. An 8 x 4 poem sounds like a plank of wood.
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😀 😀 A plank of wood! I like that!
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Let’s go
chase some good trouble.
It’s a good twist! Love the tinge of humour Sunra!
Hank
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Thanks, Hank! I’m glad 😊
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beautiful & fun!
❤
David
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Awww, thanks David ❤️
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made me smile 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂
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Excellent: “chase some good trouble.”
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Thank you, qbit! Appreciated 🙂
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That sounds like good advice. (K)
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Thank you, K! 🙂
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The best kind of trouble! Nice one.
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Thank you, Keith! 🙂
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Get in, loser! LOL. I can just picture you pulling up, throwing open the vehicle door and saying that to me, and just when I was minding my own business. :-p
–Shay
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Ha ha ha! But just so we’re clear, I would never call you loser, weirdo maybe (cause it takes one to know one) but never loser! 🙂
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Chasing trouble sounds so good, Sunra! ❤️
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Ha ha! Join me, Punam! Let’s go! ❤
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What a great twist!
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Thank you, wyndolynne! 🙂
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Wild trouble! Love what you did in 32 words!
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Thanks so much, Dora! ❤
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Awesome! Love the ending!!
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Thanks so much, Bob! 🙂
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I like the idea of the fern as an offering between two intimates.
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Thank you, Lisa. It is a pretty image, though I liked all of them on the Muse, tbh 🙂
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You’re welcome. I know what you mean about the images. Sometimes difficult to choose one to write to.
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Powerful opening. I like your voice. Great take on the prompt.
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Thanks so much, Michael! 🙂
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I love “I hold infinitude here, circling and circling….”
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Dear Sherry, thank you! 🙂
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Yes, chase some good trouble. Beautiful
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Thank you, Susie! ❤
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This is both magnificent and fragile all rolled into one my friend! I love this Sunra!
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Oh thank you, Carrie, for this wonderful comment! So pleased you enjoyed it ❤
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Love the idea of “good trouble.” Beautiful work.
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Thank you so much! ❤
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Good, good!! I’d call it “Cop on the Block”.
Thanks for peeking in, sorry I’m late.
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Not at all, Jim! Thank you for dropping by. You’re welcome any time 😅
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“Let’s go
chase some good trouble.”
yes, let’s do. very well said.
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Thank you! I’ll drop by your blog soon and catch up on your words too. I’ve definitely missed your writes!
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oh, no worries, i’ve been m.i.a. for about 6 months now, so you haven’t missed anything
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I hope you’ll be sharing your stuff again soon, we need your kind of crazy in the blogosphere! 🙂
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thank you, and yes, just getting started again and ready to roll
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