I’d never been to a séance before, and it didn’t seem appropriate this close to Christmas.
Though spacious and tastefully furnished, the room had reminded me of a vault, all sombre dark wood surround and shadowy eaves.
The thing is, I didn’t know whether to tell Janey about the tall pale man who had been standing behind her the whole time. They’d only done it for a bit of fun after all, she and her cronies, to figure out why things kept mysteriously vanishing, keys ending up in the fridge and such-like. But there he had been looking down at her, she, giggling and oblivious, as it seemed had been everyone else.
And when, shuddering, I left, gulping in the night air, I could hear the strains of a lone violin playing somewhere in the house.
© N Nazir 2022
Written for Shay’s Word Garden, where we are given inspiration with Lawrence Ferlinghetti. Words used: Christmas, violin. Shay also shares her favourite poem by him called Junkman’s Obligato, which is an absolute joy to read, I highly recommend it. You can find it over at her page.
Written also for GirlieOnTheEdge Six Sentence Story Linkup, where the prompt word is Vault. (Unfortunately, I was too late to link my post but I thought I’d share it anyway).
Written also for The Sunday Muse, image as shown.
I hope that it wasn’t Slenderman! A marvelously creepy story, my friend! However, the third word you didn’t use is going to haunt you. WooOoOOoooo. LOL.
–Shay 🙂
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Thank you, Shay! I don’t know who Slenderman is and I’m not sure I want to! You know, I tried to use more words from the list but no others fitted anywhere. What was I to do? 🙂
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Shades of Sherlock. I like it. Very good use of a writing prompt, to be sure.
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Thank you, Michael! 🙂
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Fantastic! Love the ending.
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Thank you, Bob! 🙂
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Wow, great spooky Winter Solstice story!! The tall pale man sends shivers down my back. Unique use of the prompt words. I like it.
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Thank you, Yvonne! I’m so pleased you like it 🙂
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What a nice touch ~~ I can hear the violin, suspect Janey and her pals do not! Wishing you joy thru the Holiday Season and throughout the New Year.
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Thank you, Helen! You too 🌟
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Loved this.
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Thank you, SaaniaSparkle! 🌟
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This is beautifully eerie my friend! I so enjoyed this! I apologize for being so late at getting here Sunra.
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Thanks so much, Carrie! ☺️ Don’t ever apologise, it’s lovely whenever you visit x
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yessssssss!
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Thank you!
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you’re welcome!!
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i’ve never been to a seance before, but we did have a Ouija board when we were kids, we could creep ourselves out with that pretty good. if you don’t have ouija board, just “santa claus” backwards three times in a mirror at the stroke of midnight, and he’ll bring you one next christmas =)
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Ha ha! Phillip!! Lovely to have you visit! Never heard that before. Isn’t that what you do with Candyman? 🙂
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yes, but it also works with santa claus,, if you want a ouija board for christmas
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Ha ha ha. Thanks for the tip!
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