but for a lone hobo and his dog.
I went to say hello, it was on my way
after all. He didn’t look well
nor did the hound, who I petted anyway.
Come to the shelter, I said
you’ll get a hot meal and a warm bed.
The hobo shook his head
they don’t let you in with a dog.
Oh, I didn’t know that. Sorry. So trite
to wish him merry christmas after that.
I’m sorry, I said again and gave him some change
little good it did, everything closed on the eve.
Then I walked to the shelter, huddled against the wind
late for my shift at the kitchen.
© N Nazir 2022
*Thankfully, this rule has now changed and dogs are allowed to stay with their owners if they check in at the homeless shelters over the Christmas / New Year period (in the UK).
Shared for W3, hosted by David, where Murisopsis, the poet of the week, invites us to write a poem of exactly fourteen lines on the topic of poverty (moral, romantic, financial, etc).
Shared also for dVerse Open Link Night, hosted by Linda.
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And here’s my Throwback Thursday for you. I love this band. Couldn’t Care More by the Fine Young Cannibals from their album with the same name, first released in 1985. What have you been listening to lately? 🙂
Good to hear the rule was changed.
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I know. Now they often have vets volunteer their services during that period which is great.
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That’s wonderful, glad to hear it.
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I am so glad to hear they changed that awful rule.
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Me too, KeriC9. Appreciate you dropping by and thanks for the follow 🙂
I tried clicking on your name, but it doesn’t go to your WP site? It says this site is not available. Let me know when that’s fixed and I can check out your blog too.
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LOL You were just there. You read and commented on Child of Poverty. Ring a bell?
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Yeah I know. You can visit it through a link you’ve posted but not via your name. I’ll pop there again soon.
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I have worked with the gravatar recently. I have no idea what the problem is.
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It happened to mine too. I’m not sure what I did but it seemed to fix itself. It is annoying though.
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Yeah, I’m having enough problems with wp over the last several days.
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A very touching poem. There are a number of things that exclude people who need help from getting it!
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Thanks Dwight! It’s true.
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That is amazing the way it turned out!
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☺️🌸
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Love the twist at the end!
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It’s actually true. But I like that it came across as a twist! I haven’t done it since before the pandemic though.
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A great story. Good for you!
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Very effectively poignant Sunra – sensitvely felt and carefully crafted…
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Thank you, Scott! Appreciated.
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glad they changed the rule, for some homeless people, their pets are their own companions/family, how could then abandon them to the cold? heartbreaking poem sunra
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Exactly!! I know. Thank you, Phillip 💖
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That is good news. I feel sad for these homeless folks. Wishing you Happy New Year.
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Thank you, Grace! Happy New Year to you too 🌟
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Your poem reminded me of a dream I just had the other night, strange enough, where I was having to evacuate because of some horrible thing, but was trying to save all the dogs in the city and I was stuffing one under my shirt trying to get it on the bus to leave before Armageddon hit. Just wanted to share how the story resonated and I am so glad they changed the rule as the homeless with pets deserve help and support. Bravo for doing your part as well! 👏👏
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Thank you for sharing that, Tricia! How fascinating! Love that you were trying to stuff one under your shirt 😀 There might be a poem in there somewhere? 🙂 Really glad this resonated with you, appreciate that, thank you ❤
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My pleasure, Sunra! 💝
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You capture a sense of futility here. Sad, to be sure.
But on a lighter note: have you heard FYCs cover of “Love for Sale”? Very nice.
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Thank you, Michael. I actually haven’t listened to that one, no, but I’m listening to it right now! Good shout 🙂
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I’m glad to hear that the rule was changed. You tell a snippet of life so clearly here!
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Thank you, wordsandcoffee1! 🙂
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Much love for this one. And the dog.
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Manja!!!! Thank you, my friend ❤
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Great slice of life poetry. Shows the ugly reality of our world. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Jay! Appreciate it 🙂
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Sunra, I really like the conversational style of this one! Here it is still a no go if there is a pet. Sad but true – only service dogs that meet the strict requirements…
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Thank you, murisopsis! Is that right? Are you in the UK? Perhaps some places don’t then. I know in Bristol and Birmingham they do.
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No I’m in the USA. There are allowances but generally the rules are much less inclusive for pets – restaurants don’t allow dogs except for seeing eye dogs and others of that type – have to meet the criteria for a service animal: four feet on the floor (no carrying the dog), must be trained for a specific task, must be identified as a service animal, no one permitted to pet or interfere with the animal while working (which should be any time it is in public)… not at all like in the UK or Europe where dogs are often taken everywhere with the owners!
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Ah, that’s interesting. Yeah, not everywhere here is dog-friendly either but more and more places seem to be. Service animals are always allowed in general, as far as I’m aware. A handful of pubs in my city allow anyone to bring their dog when they have a pint as long as they sit in a designated area. As long they’re well-trained, it should be allowed, I think.
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That last couplet is striking indeed.
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Thank you, Shay.
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For the love of dogs people will stay out in the cold, hungry. Glad that was finally understood and the rule relaxed.
A touching poem.
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Thank you, D.Avery.
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How wonderful they changed the rule.
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I think they have in most places but not every single one, it seems.
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“So trite
to wish him merry christmas after that.” A powerful ‘in the moment’ poem and it rings true – I’m glad the dogs are allowed – I’m sure the dogs give so much comfort and love!
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Thank you, Margaret 🙂
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That is a problem here as well–no pets allowed. The shelters are awful anyway, little better than the street, really. Why can’t we provide everyone with a decent room and a bed and enough to eat? And it’s only getting worse…(K)
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That’s a shame, K. Where are you in the world? Here the shelters move around year by year depending on where they can get but they always have a sleeping area for a short time. Thank you for dropping by.
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I’m in NYC. We have a huge homeless problem that gets worse by the month. Mental illness, drug use, lack of affordable housing, horrible landlords, low salaries, domestic violence, gentrification–no one seems to know how or where to even begin.
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Oh, that sounds awful, K. Especially with the winters you guys get over there! I’m sorry to hear that.
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It’s very distressing.
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Lovely, Sunra! This is a lovely piece – so full of humanity and compassion.
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Thank you, Worms!
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Wholly absorbing and full of pathos, Sunra. Sometimes the only connection — love — homeless folks have is with their pet. So glad this was finally recognized where you live. ❤️
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Thank you for your kind words, Dora! ❤️
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*sigh*
homeless shelters have so many restrictions…. some only let you stay for a limited time for example, and then force you to spend some time on the street before coming back…
😦
David
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Yeah, it’s like that here, David. I guess that’s why people start a squat. Thanks for dropping by and reading 🙂
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hi, Sunra ❤
The lovely Denise is hosting W3 this week ~ and she's come up with a unique prompt!
https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/01/18/w3-prompt-38-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy 🙂
David
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Homelessness is an ongoing problem in our city. Thanks for using your words to bring awareness to this struggle.☮️
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Thank you for your kind comment, Ali 🌟
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Too real. Too sad. I can see the hobo and his dog huddled alone somewhere out in the cold…
Moving pathos.
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Thank you, Leslie. It was – still is – real. Appreciate you reading and commenting 🌸
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Sunra ❤
I just wanna share that this week's W3, hosted by the sweet, lovely Sarah David, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/01/11/w3-prompt-37-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy!
~David
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Thanks for letting me know, David. I’ll check it out 👍💛
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🤗
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