Nomad, Erasure Poem #79, watercolour & gel pen on paper, (Sketchbooks 2022), © N Nazir 2022
Text source: Indigo, Marina Warner, p.221
the night whispered in excitement
she was a rose-pink starwoman
far from home
her eyes buttonbrown
her palms, like delicate fish
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Published in Issue VIII: Guinevere of Free Verse Revolution Lit Journal, along with erasure poem Revelation and painting Scrying at Dawn. You can download a free digital issue here.
Shared for dVerse Open Link Night, hosted by Lillian.
Wow! 🤩 Great mystical piece! 👏👏
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Thank you, Tricia! ❤
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My pleasure! 💓
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Beautiful Nina! 🤍💜💚 You know I’m your fan number one! Besitos amiga
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Muchas gracias, amiga!! Un abrazo enorme! ❤ Xx
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I love your presentation, Sunra – it looks so great in the magazine!
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Thank you so much, Ingrid! ❤ Appreciate your kind words 🙂
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Oooooh, I want more!
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Ha ha! Thanks Lillian 🙂 I always have more!
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Love this, and the hand scattering (as I see it) embryonic fish!
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Thank you, Peter! That’s a lovely way of looking at it! 🙂
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Goodness! Cool by every angle! 📐 👏
I’m always so impressed. The words are incredible as is the artwork. Always. Bless you for sharing.
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Selma, you are too kind, my dear! 💖 Thank you so much! 🌟
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Love the color palette and vibe! 👏 Well done!
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Thanks so much, scarlettcat! 🌟 💖
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You’re welcome!
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So good! Especially the last two lines. What lyricism! And really love the colors.
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Thank you, Bob! 🙂
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Beautiful, Sunra. I always love the visual appeal of your erasure poems.
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Thank you, Merril! I’m pleased you do 🙂
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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Palms like fish…lovely. Colors just right too. (K)
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Thank you, K! 🙂 Appreciated.
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Every Word A Leaf Yes
Creating A New Tree
Oh to Be Human
With iMaGiNaTioN
Free Such A Miracle
To BREaTHE Creativity Real..:)
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Thank you! I agree! Where would we be without creativity? 🙂
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SMiles Sunra Rainz
Without Creavity
River Being
Dries
Desert Up
From Living Waves☺️
Water Ocean Whole Breath🏝
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Goosebumps from this, Sunra.
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Thank you, Lisa! ❤ I'm delighted with that 🙂
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You’re welcome ❤
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Fan-friggin’-tastic, Sunra – this is magical.
❤
David
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Thanks so much, David ❤️ Appreciate you saying so!
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Stunning artwork here as accompaniment to your words, Sunra! 😍 I love it! 💖💖
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Thanks so much, Sanaa! Pleased you like it! ❤ 🙂
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oh, that is gorgeous! wow! so well done, and congrat on the publication, checking it out now
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Thanks so much, Phillip! Pleased you like it 🙂
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Wow. Not only are the words stunning, but what a beautiful visual.
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Thanks so much for your kind words, Bridgette! ❤
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