
Truth-spilling into marginalia, my scribbling overflow. Word gypsies. The blank page and permission to emote. My hands seem older than me, my little brown hands. Fluttering to my face, my hair. My roots. Need enlightening.
I want to join the cult of cats if they’d let me. In the boulevard of parallel ugh-ness. I’d probably have to be initiated. I’d give up before they even miaowed their instructions at me and stalk away, bemused. You can’t tell me what to do, you glaring of felines. I’m a scarecrow in disguise and I’m not sorry.
Paint some washes of denim-blue and dive in, everything you need to know is there. And yet.
The rippling sea bed is alive with octopi hiding from those they thought were their sea buddies but who were secretly planning to eat them. It really is quite dreadful.
But it’s okay. For there are always dolphins. And those dudes have got your back.
Not a smart-ass, just bookish and curious-orange. You spot patterns, you see how they’ll unfurl. You may stay. Or take your leave, knowing what will happen. It’s not psychic, it’s just being on this planet does that to you.
Anyway, it’s lovely to meet you, how are you?
© N Nazir 2023
© Diego Romeo
Written for Shay’s Word Garden where we are given inspiration with Randy Newman. Words used: overflow, gypsies, boulevard, scarecrow(s), sorry, smart-ass.
Written also for dVerse Poetry Prompt, hosted by Grace, who challenges us to write a poem using word play, specifically the literary devices of anthimeria, kennings or oxymorons.
Sublime. So might it be raining cats, over there? They just couldn’t wait for the wine-o’clock party to begin, huh! But you gave them fair warning, my friend. A wonderful scarecrow you be! Thanks. This is a fun read. (Again)
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Thank you so much, Selma! Ha ha, it has been raining cats a little, yes. Glad you found it fun! I can’t explain what pops out of my brain sometimes! 🙂 x
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“Ugh-ness” I love it.
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Thank you, Melissa! 🙂
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How lovely. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
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Thank you, Worms! I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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I love it! 🐈⬛❤️ Besitos amiga.
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Gracias amiga! Besitos! ❤ xx
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Oh, this is splendid, Sunra. You had me at the title, but my favorite bit was the roots needing enlightening. What to do when the cats won’t let you join up? Go down by the sea, of course, and talk to the dolphins. That ending is perfect btw.
–Shay
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Thanks so much, Shay! I’m so pleased you like it. Ha ha! Yes I like the ending too. It seemed like the most natural way to end it. It was a great word list! I’ll check out the next one soon 🙂
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We have three cats, so I’m on board for the cult of cats.
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Ha ha! Brilliant 🙂
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This is beautifully done, Sunra! Truly enjoyed this unique yet specific piece…marvelously done 🤍🤗
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Thanks so much, Grace! Always appreciate your kind words ❤ 🙂
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I loved delving into the twists and turns and particularly liked the idea of your roots being enlightened!
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Ha ha! Thank you, Peter! Sometimes, one goes into surreal territory and there they stay 🙂
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It’s been far too long since I got out and about to read, and finding this shiny little bauble of words first thing this morning proves it. You have such a light touch here, SunRa, tho the seriousness of things is far from hidden. I especially love the octopi–how hard it must be for them being so smart in a landscape of primal urges and big teeth–rather like us, indeed. I also love ‘the cult of cats.” Not a bauble, but a gem here.
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Hedgewitch Joy!! How lovely to hear from you. I was thinking about you recently as. noticed you hadn’t been online as much. Thank you for your amazing comment, you’re so kind ❤ I'll come over and visit your blog very soon 🙂
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EMBRaCinG the DarK Leaving
ALL LiT uP Directions And Lessons
Out of the LiGHT God Yes Oh the MaGiC
Of Chaos When We Let All the Preplanning
Go Just to Flow As the Ocean We aRe Waves Water
Air Just Free
As Wings Are
Flown By Winds
And Fins Are Swum Whole
By CuRReNTS of Water SaMe
True Even A Poetic Name Like
SUNRA RAINZ in Word Play
Will Speak Volumes
on the Paradox
of the Freedom
of Art Bringing
Ultimate Order to LiGHT iN DarK
Out of Chaos MaGiC With SMiLEs…
Anyway i’m Doing Great Just Strolling
Around the World For Poetic Muse since
the End of the Pandemic And Introspection
That Era Brought With Wings Trapped Back into
The COG of CuLTuRES AGAiN How could i Refuse
A Most Wondrous Name That Really Spells Reality in
Two Words
Yes At Core
Sun Rains Yes
So Thanks Again
SUNRA RAINZ as Not
Only are You Creative
You Have Been Kind
Enough to Welcome
The Chaos MaGiC
of my Art
into Your
Blog Home too With SMiLes
Yes That is A Bit Unusual in
Some Parts of the Poetsphere
With Lines Restricted to Rules
Really It’s okay to create Novel
Ways of Communication the
Core Art of How Humans Come Together
Yes Greater Than Ever in Newer Colors Soul Free…:)
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😀 😀 Thank you, katiemiafrederick, for your thoughtful considered comment. Appreciate your kind and creative words and thank you for dropping by 🙂
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All my Pleasure Happy
To See Sunra Rainz
Again On The
dVerse Trail
With
SMiles☺️🙌
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Wow. That is fantastic. Every part of it is great, I’ve read and re-read.
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Thank you so much, qbit 🙂
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What a deft touch you have, Sunra! Fabulous, surreal wordplay! ❤️
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Thanks so much, Punam! ❤ x
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My pleasure. ❤️
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