It’s no coincidence
that God is dog backwards.
Smell, your superpower.
This way you know everything.
I remember how
you’d slink around
silent as hushed skirts,
not like the others,
keeping the ghosts away
with your all-knowing.
The lexicon of your love
was the way you’d lean against me
brief, your lean warmth
here now then gone.
Built for racing.
You never did.
How you’d howl at the door
whenever he left. Your master
has a new companion now.
We remember you.
You’re still loved.
© N Nazir 2022
NaPoWriMo prompt: This is a fun one – it’s a prompt developed by the comic artist Lynda Barry, and it asks you to think about dogs you have known, seen, or heard about, and then use them as a springboard into wherever they take you.
For more information and to take part, please visit www.napowrimo.net
Also written for Sammi Scribbles Weekend Writing Prompt: Lexicon, 85 words
oh, Sunra….this is so sweet and sad…
😦 ❤
David
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Thank you, David.
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Great application of two prompts, Sunra. 🙂
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Thank you, Bill 🙂 I saw Sammi was back so I had to!
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Of course. 🙂
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Masterful, as always, reaching for descriptions that go past the mere complimenting..
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Lovely poem, Sunra. You say so much with so little. Congratulations on being featured!
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Thanks so much, Smitha V! Appreciate your kind words 🙂
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Congratulations. Warmly and beautifully done.
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Thanks so much, Sonia! Appreciate your kind words 🙂
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Thank you so much, Ain!! So glad you got a chance to read it 🙂
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👏👏
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Thank you, K.Hartless! 🙂
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You’re very welcome.
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You slay, girl. Hurrraaah for the prompt that made you wag your poet tail and write this poem. Much love. ❤
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Thank you, Manja!! I was delighted when I saw it this afternoon. It’s alway the poem I least expect that gets the attention! Appreciated ❤
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And congratulations. 🙂
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Thanks Bill! It did make my day 🙂
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Thanks for the mention, Manja!! ❤
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Thanks so much, Selma! Appreciate the mention! 🙂 x
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This is beautiful. I especially like the second stanza.
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Thanks so much, Shawna! ❤
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Congratulations – this poem is incredibly sad and packed with feeling. x
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Thank you, Nina! How lovely to hear from you 🙂 I appreciate your kind words, thank you again ❤
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Thank you for the share!
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Congratulations, Sunra! This is suffused with so much fuzzy feeling and crafted skillfully. ❤️
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Thank you kindly, Punam! ❤️ Fuzzy feeling is a good way to describe it!
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This is absolutely gorgeous writing! I just wrote something special on my blog about an incredible dog as well. Great minds think alike right? 🥰 thanks for sharing!
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Thank you so much, LaShelle! 💖 Appreciated. I shall swing by your blog and check yours out soon!
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Looking forward to your thoughts!
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