he was already drunk when he came in
or on something, probably
those peyote buttons he tried one time.
He wanted to tell me stories
while I served him up a pale ale
and asked him what he was doing
round these here parts.
Looking for an ally, he said
or power, or both.
Sounds fascinating, I said
thinking I better not
serve him again after this one.
He lit up a joint and I told him
he couldn’t smoke in here
but he only blew me a smoke ring
and began telling me about the time
he wrestled a giant moth the size of a tree.
It’s the shaman’s sign, he said
if a moth flies into you, scattering
its gold dust upon your person.
Ah, I said, thinking, I hope dude’s not driving
but then he blew another smoke ring
and a smaller one through that one
and they turned into demons
fighting in mid-air
and I was kind of hypnotised.
I noticed too
how his jade-green eyes
turned purple then dark. Felt like
some kind of sorcery was going down.
What is this ally you’re looking for?
I asked, intrigued, despite myself.
One that holds an answer to my riddle, he mused.
Problem is I don’t know what form it’ll take
or if I’m in the right place
but I followed the gold dust
and it led me to you.
I laughed, thinking
that was a line I hadn’t heard before
but he didn’t laugh with me
and asked instead when was the last time
you saw the moon make love to the sun?
When was the last time
you had a good night’s sleep, sir?
I didn’t want to play his game,
I had no time for riddles
and it was nearly the end of my shift.
Would you care for a midnight walk? he asked
as if he’d read my mind.
Hackles risen, I merely smiled
then turned away to serve someone else
but when I returned he’d disappeared
and a huge moth
the size of my hand
fluttered into the air
and over my head
into the lamplight
spraying gold dust as it went.
© N Nazir 2024
NaPoWriMo Prompt 30: to write a poem in which the speaker is identified with, or compared to, a character from myth or legend, as in Claire Scott’s poem “Scheherazade at the Doctor’s Office.”
*Not sure I’ve followed the brief but this is what popped out of my brain this morning.
*Thank you for following my NaPoWriMo journey to the end, I appreciate it ❤️
Very trippy! Loved it.
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Thank you, Heather! 🌺
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Really like how you worked dialogue into your poem along with the imagery and the cool twist at the end. Thanks for posting so many cool poems this month!
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Thanks so much, Elizabeth! I have very much enjoyed your poems too this month and I’m glad I came across your blog! ☺️
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Love and love and love. Funny, gracious, and plenty of soul…great way to end the month!
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Thank you so much, JPP!! I’m delighted you loved it x 3! 🌸
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To be sprayed with gold dust by a giant moth is the perfect way to end April! I haven’t read Castaneda but this was a fascinating conversation. I hope there’s a sequel! ( Long ago, I wrote a bunch of poems, a series called Monologues with a minor god… I must go find them now! )
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Thank you, Rajani! I’m surprised you haven’t read him as you’ve read almost everything else! The CC series are pretty amazing. Perhaps I may write a sequel… ☺️
Do share your monologues, they sound intriguing. I’d like to know which minor god it is.
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This is so on point for Carlos Castenada
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Thank you for saying so, VJ! ☺️ Glad you “get” it.
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Oh, I do. You’re welcome
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Whooa. A fair share of magic, just what is required. Thank you.
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Thank you, Manja! How lovely to have you drop by! Did you do NaPoWriMo too? Hope you’re well 🌸
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No, not this year. I also closed my blog. Ten years was plenty. Still getting notifications for some blogs and the title of your poem drew me in.
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Oh no, did you?! I thought I hadn’t seen any posts from you for a while. But how will we follow your adventures now? I shall just email you personally, in that case ❤️ Do let me know if you have any writing news, publications, etc.
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You may email me at any time. Not taking many photos these days and even when I do, I’m in no hurry to transfer them to the computer. Funny how this happens. (Also, not writing or submitting.)
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I think it’s a natural stage of creativity, what I call the gathering-juice stage. Or because something else within you needs your attention. Either way resting is also doing, my friend.
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This is so life-affirming. Thanks.
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This is marvelous. The dialogue alone is stellar and reason enough to love it, but I love the entire thing. How did you come to choose Casteneda? I have not read him, so I don’t know if there is a connection with the moth or if you just came up with that on your own, but I love it either way.
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Thank you so much for your kind words, Shay. I don’t know why I chose Castaneda, this poem kind of came out whole this morning, which doesn’t happen often. I read his series a long time ago in my teens and it has always stuck with me. The moth appears to him in a vision, I believe, after he’s taken peyote. He didn’t wrestle with it though, the rest I made up. I’m shocked you haven’t read him! But I’m delighted you like the poem.
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Well-told tales, both his and yours. Thanx!
Mybe i’ll write one about my (true) accidental run-in with Ginsberg…
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Thank you, Ron! I would love to hear about the time you stalked – sorry, bumped into – Ginsberg! ☺️
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Marvellous! I enjoyed this very much but missed a music video this time! I wonder what you would have chosen? 🤗🙋♂️
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😂 Thank you, Ashley! You know, I decided not to add an image or a song as I wanted to leave the poem up to the reader’s imagination this time. But if I did, I would have added either something from the band Ojos de Brujo or The Doors ☺️
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I understand, of course, I was just so taken by the last post! 🤗 Love your choice of bands! You have a broad view of the arts, which I love! 💓🤗🙋♂️
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Thank you, Ashley! 🤗 Really appreciate it ☺️
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Great stuff – very imaginative and accessible/fun. I’m tempted to have a go next year. X
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Thank you, Angie! ☺️ You should, they’re optional prompts and you don’t have to do every single one x
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I’ve enjoyed your epic journey through the NaPoWriMo. Well done Nina.
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Thank you so much, Peter ❤️
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A fun story, well-written.
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Thank you, Shaun.
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Entertaining in the most poetic and fantastical sense!
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Thank you, Dora! 😍🌹
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this is magic !!! I’ve read it again and again, I was a huge fan of the Don Juan books when he was big, really big. This is so well done and on the strength of this alone, count me a subscriber 🙂
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Thanks so much, John! I’m delighted to hear that! Yeah, the Don Juan books are just one of a kind, aren’t they? Really pleased you enjoyed it and have subscribed! ☺️
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looking forward to your next posts 🙂
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This is such a great poem. I could see both characters, although I had a picture in my head of Castenada from a long time ago. But I saw the bartender clearly, too. I’m sure you have heard of the old Fleetwood Mac song, “Hypnotized” but just in case you haven’t, here’s a link. Fleetwood Mac – Hypnotized Lyrics | Genius Lyrics
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Ha ha, thanks for that! I’ll check out the lyrics now. Tbh, I’ve no idea what CC looks like or used to look like. I just went with my imagination. Appreciated!
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So weird and different. I had to Google him up. Seems like exactly the kind of conversation he’d have had with a pragmatic person. I loved both voices: the protagonist’s and his. Great storytelling.
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Thank you so much! Really appreciate that, OP ❤️
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