the power of poetry, the punch of drunk, the swell of prayer
the French of kiss, the fire of protest, the swiftness of hunt, the
exactness of karma, the onwards of upwards, the good fight.
© N Nazir 2024
NaPoWriMo Prompt 28: to try your hand at writing a sijo. This is a traditional Korean verse form. A sijo has three lines of 14-16 syllables. The first line introduces the poem’s theme, the second discusses it, and the third line, which is divided into two sentences or clauses, ends the poem – usually with some kind of twist or surprise.
You could also write a sijo in six lines – at least when it comes to translating classical sijo into English, translators seem to have developed this habit, as you can see from these translations of poems by Jong Mong-Ju and U Tak.
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*Written also for Thought Purge’s poem-a-day challenge, prompt 5: the power of poetry.
*Written using the classic syllabic count of 3-4-4-4 / 3-4-4-4 / 3-5-4-3
Sijo is so tough to write, great that you came to the form with a unique approach! The onwards of upwards… love that… that’s what the good fight needs now!
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Thank you! I did want to change the arrangement but I thought I’d leave it as three lines. Glad you like it!
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I love the way you play with words, Nina! ❤️ Besitos.
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Thank you, my chick! This could so easily be a list poem, it nearly was! I thought of you then 💕 Besitos 😘
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I read it like a list poem, chica! 😉
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Ha ha ha! 🤗
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A new form to me – well done indeed, and a super bonus of REM!
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Thank you, Peter! Glad you like it! And I spent at least an hour listening to music before I decided on this tune 😂 (less time than usual).
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An inspiring read. Keep shining your light.
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Thanks so much, Ali 💗
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I like the rhythm of this. (K)
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Thank you, K! ☺️
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Fantastic wordplay, Sunra! ❤️
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Thank you, lovely ❤️
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Always such a pleasure, dear.❤️😊
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