Write a sonnet, they said. I’m on it, I said.
Except today it seems I have nothing to say,
nothing of substance anyway. I’ve been travelling.
again from city to city, sometimes this is how
my writing gets done. But now it’s too hard
to concentrate because the walls are paper thin
and the couple next door are making love again
and they’ve been at it quite a while now. Still,
I think it’s sweet that they’re trying to be quiet
because they know the walls cannot disguise
every knocking groan and sigh, and I can surely
hear them but in truth, it doesn’t bother me
except for the fact I have to write a sonnet
when I really haven’t anything to say.
© N Nazir 2024
NaPoWriMo Prompt 27: to write an “American sonnet.” What’s that? Well, it’s like a regular sonnet but . . . fewer rules? Like a traditional Spencerian or Shakespearean sonnet, an American sonnet is shortish (generally 14 lines, but not necessarily!), discursive, and tends to end with a bang, but there’s no need to have a rhyme scheme or even a specific meter. Here are a few examples:
- Wanda Coleman’s American Sonnet (10)
- Terence Hayes’s American Sonnet for the New Year
- Ted Berrigan’s Sonnet LXXXVIII
If you’d like more specific instructions for how to get started, Write 253 has a great “formula” prompt for an American sonnet, which you can find here.
*you could definitely say my sonnet ended with a bang.
Haha! Sunra, this is fabulous! 😀❤️
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Thank you, Punam! ❤️ I mean, it’s true, so… 🙂
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You are welcome. So…❤️
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😄
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Nice work. Slice-of-life-kind-of piece. Entertaining as always!
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Hey Ben! Thank you, my friend! Hope life is treating you well ☺️
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It’s all rightish. Doing pretty okay now. Hope you’re doing well as well!! Glad you’re still writing amazing stuff as always. You’re creativity is top-notch. Appreciate your words and art.
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Appreciate your kind words, Ben! ☺️ Glad you’re doing okay now? Wishing you well 🌺
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Thanks so much. All the best to you as well!
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The everyday, always gives us something to say…this is great!
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Thank you, Heather! ☺️ Appreciated.
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You’re welcome.
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You could indeed. (K)
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Ended with a bang, indeed! 🙂 I’ve never tried this form…
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What a wonderful sense of humor you have — and determination!
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Thank you, Elizabeth! 🤩
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Dear Sunra:
I was never really bothered
With prompts,
But your sort of sonnet,
Its sweet couplings
Of words and animations
Has me rocking
To its downbeat rhythm,
A sort of smooching
In the park on a Sunday afternoon,
Thinking, watching the world!
I had nothing to say
Until your verse came along,
And there you were, waiting,
At the end of my line.
Ashley
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Ha ha! Very clever, Ashley! An excellent sonnet, my friend 🌸 I love how you incorporated the band’s lyrics and video in your poem, I appreciated all the nuances! Well done 🙂
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And I learnt a new word: rotoscoping! 🙏
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So have I now! Thanks for that 🙂
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Very nice! Perhaps your neighbors can be an inspiration for an exciting sonnet!?
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Ha ha. I think they were as I had no choice ☺️
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:>)
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Ha! Funny and clever. I didn’t know there was such a thing called an American Sonnet. So thanks for introducing it to me.
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Thank you, OP! And you’re most welcome. They’re much easier than the usual sonnet as there’s no need to stick to the structure.
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