Because life’s too short not to share your poems.
For your poem may yield the answer someone is looking for.
And poems need to be heard even though they’re shy and like to come in disguise.
And the poet is the guardian of the poem but the poem takes on a life of its own once sent forth.
For the poem will naturally spring from the heart to make sense of the deeper blues and all things fallen, where ordinary words won’t do, to honour the thing that wants to spill itself.
And the poem longs to be understood and never is, yet sometimes too is fathomed in ways it didn’t intend but extends beyond its humble beginning.
For the poem doesn’t always like to dress up in fancy frock language, it just wants to move you or surprise you, just make you feel something, to show you its window view, so you may see beyond your house of cards box room.
And the poem can melt an icicle to tears because it knew love then lost it but got back up and carried on.
Because the poem has a sense of humour, is insane with wisdom and has a twist at the end.
And for Goddess’ sake, the poem must be shared and not kept in a journal in a box of journals in an attic room in a house where no one goes in the attic room.
For the poem loves to undress for you, slowly and exquisitely, and let you savour it piece by piece.
Because you too are a wild poem walking the earth, even though your words may be bullshit or holy, a promise writ in sand, or you haven’t yet found your words.
© N. Nazir 2021
Written for Shay’s Word Garden, where the word pool has been taken from the lyrics of musician Laura Marling. Words used: blues, bullshit, fallen, holy, sand, wild.
In case you want to join in the fun, please visit Shay’s page for details and full word list 🙂
Shared also for Ragtag Daily Prompt: Twist
#Ragtag Daily Prompt, #RDP, #twist
I was listening to Laura Marling only recently. Here’s one of hers I like:
I love the life and true depth you have given a poem and the idea of being a wild poem walking the earth is so cool! This is a wonderful ode to poetry and poets Sunra!
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Thanks so much for your kind words, Carrie! 💛 I’m so pleased you think so!
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Wow. If I listed my favorite lines, I’d end up listing them all. But the line,
And poems need to be heard even though they’re shy and like to come in disguise.
really resonates with me. This is one of my favorites of yours. Really well done!!
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Bob, that’s lovely, thank you! How wonderful that you have favourites of mine!! I’m delighted.
You know, reading over that line, I realise it half echoes a line from one of your poems. It must have seeped into my unconscious, what can I say! 😂
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I didn’t notice that.
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I love this. I feel like it was written just for me.
My favorites:
“where ordinary words won’t do to honour the thing that wants to spill itself“
“the poem loves to undress for you”
“you too are a wild poem”
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Sungrain, thank you for your lovely comment and picking out your favourite lines. It’s great to know as I never quite know how the poem will land. Appreciated ☀️☀️
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Amen to all of this, Sunra! And I’m laffin hard at “fancy frock language”! The gentleman in the fancy frock was feeding Fancy Feast to his Siamese with ease. Pfft! LOL
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Thanks so much for inviting me to your word garden and for dropping by and reading, Shay! 😊
I love how you’ve riffed off that line!! 😍
I wish more gentlemen would wear fancy frocks 💛
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This! I absolutely love this ❤ ❤
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Dahlia, thanks so much for reading and commenting, appreciated 💕
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I’m more stuffed shirt than fancy frock but I loved it!
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Oh stuffed shirt is always welcome at my party, Pete! 😂 Thank you 💕
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Thank you for your wisdom, answers and a new tune.
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Thank YOU, Manja! ☀️ Glad you like the tune. I suspect you’d like most of what’s on my mp3 player.
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Yep, I agree. If you want to test my eclectic tastes, here is just the last of four mixed playlists on my Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL9CntVf3eeDQPGIBLVXPL0H9qzJ2_9-50
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I shall check them out!
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Ode to the poem!
If this is the last poem written in 2021, what a fitting celebration of the the craft.
The warmth of creativity, pulses through the body of this.
I feel lifted. Carried through the year, in the arms of liberating poetry.
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Thank you, Darius, for your lovely comment! 🙂
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A perfect poem. Looking forward to reading more in 2022! Take care my friend.X
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Thank you, Gwil! Lovely to hear from you. X
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yes! loved all of this, love the ideas and the form, and especially liked:
“For the poem loves to undress for you, slowly and exquisitely, and let you savour it piece by piece.
Because you too are a wild poem walking the earth”
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Thank you so much, Phillip! I appreciate your lovely comments, and for pointing out your favourite lines ☀️
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Hey Sunra, did my previous comment end up in your spam folder, or did it not send?
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It did indeed! Thanks for prompting me to check!
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A fine piece of poeming, Sunra. Your descriptions of the essential nature of poems resonates with me.
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Thank you, Lisa! I’m so glad you liked it 🙂
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I did and you’re welcome 🙂
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Very complete, Sunra, your qualities of a poem. I will keep this handy, not in a chest in the attic. Thank you.
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Thank you, Jim! ☀️😊
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