Your move. King? No, queen. Wait – there is no queen. Knight, it is. What were you saying? Something about ecstasy? No, I was talking about the expectation of absurdity. Oh? Like when society expects one thing but your soul demands another. It’s the nonsense of things being various. Like gingerbread in summer? Or ice cream in winter? You could say that. What I mean is, no one writes letters any more. The soul wants letters. Instead we are saturated with the toxic thoughts of the masses on platforms that suck out our souls. Mmmmmm, interesting. I suppose people have an overwhelming need to share. Your move. I need a moment…. there. Do you think we ever really know who we are? And that’s why we talk? In order to discover? I think we’re always on the verge of becoming. Yes, but do we ever? Perhaps not. Not if we’re still here. I’m glad to be here. Even though everything seems broken. I know what you mean. There is still beauty in the world. There will always be beauty. The luminous beauty of maths, for instance. Or the ping of understanding between hearts when they open. Yes. A good joke is also beauty. Wouldn’t you say? It depends on the filter of your lens that day. Mmmmmm. Anyway, it’s your move…
© N Nazir 2022
Written for The Sunday Muse (images as shown), Shay’s Word Garden, where we are given inspiration with the poetry of Amy Lowell, Poets and Storytellers United, and Ragtag Daily Prompt: Luminous
Considering both those guys are incarcerated they do some seriously deep thinking
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Hi Larry! Yes 🙂 Why not? One would have ample time to do so in prison. Some people are genuinely reformed as a result, some are imprisoned when they’re innocent. Tbh, I used the image as a springboard without strictly attributing the dialogue to the two men pictured. But it can be read any way you want. Thank you for sharing your thoughts 🙂
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I love the seemingly mundane conversation, when I dig deeper .. I know it is not. .. Well done. Cheers.
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Thank you, Helen! 🙂 x
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This is simply fantastic!!!!!!!!!! I love it so much!!
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Thank you so much, Worms! ❤ For your kind words, and the amount of exclamation marks you've used! It made me chuckle! 😀 😀
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Lol. And I saw you in Visual Verse Anthology! Congrats on that too!!🥳🥳
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Oh really?! I had no idea!! 😮 Thanks so much for letting me know! I forgot I submitted. That’s wonderful, thank you for being the bearer of good news!! 😂 I’m so delighted 😊
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Woohooo!!! 😆
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“I think we’re always on the verge of becoming” is a nice outlook
for someone locked up to have. Pretty deep in what we should know.
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Thank you, Jim! 🙂
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There IS always beauty. Once, many years ago, I was sitting in the Broadway 50/50 with my dear friend Jim. We were noticing some of the small details around the place and he observed that noticing things like that, or knowing the story behind a thing, just makes life more interesting. I think that’s a kind of beauty, and then of course the recognition and savoring of any kind of beauty just makes life a better gig,
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Absolutely, Shay! It’s great when you can share your observations like that with someone. I’m an out-and-out aesthete, I can’t help it. But I love how the idea of beauty is so relative too. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me 🙂
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This is magnificent Sunra! I love the deep conversation at play here! You took both prompts and created something to ponder with the heart and mind. Wonderful, thought provoking and beautiful!
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Carrie, thank you so much! ❤ You always give us such evocative imagery to play with! Glad you liked it 🙂
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Loved the back and forth of the conversation and the brief respite of contact.
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Thank you, wyndolynne 🙂
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A fascinating dialogue!
Yes, we mustn’t lose sight of the beauty there still is in the world.
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Thank you, Rosemary! 🙂
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Depends on the “filter of our lens” isn’t that the sad truth? And it is so hard to see from any other lens but maybe if I move just a bit there will be a different perspective.
Wonderful conversation here and good questions.
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Absolutely, Debi! Yes, if one were to just try and see things from a new perspective, everything else would shift too and a new truth would be available to us. Thank you for your kind words and for sharing your thoughts on this 🙂
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I love this! The way you captured the characters’ voices. So clever
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Thank you, JYP! I’m so glad you like it 🙂
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Yes, the soul wants letters. I think bloggers are still writing them.
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I agree, Colleen! Thank you for dropping by and sharing your thoughts 🙂
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Wonderful! I was especially stuck by, “no one writes letters any more. The soul wants letters.” I miss letter writing.
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Thank you, Bob! No one seems to send postcards either. Perhaps if we started sending those again, letters would soon follow? 🙂
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Haha. I think you’re right, Sunra. I plan on sending some postcards soon.
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😊
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Loved this, Sunra. “The soul wants letters”: yeah, we do, want it all spelled out, but relationships never are. So well put,
~Dora
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Thank you so much, Dora ❤ Lovely to hear from you after so long. Hope you are well 🙂
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A good joke sometimes feels like the most beautiful thing ever.
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Kestril, I could not agree with you more! Absolutely and yes 😀
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That was really great. Every line unexpected and moving into the next.
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Thanks so much, qbit.
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Love how this runs along… sounds to me a lot like the conversations that happen inside my head!
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Thank you, Rajani! I’m glad you could relate! 😊
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Beautiful ! Thanks for sharing ☺️☺️
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Thank you, Priti! 😊 I’m glad you like it.
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It’s pleasure of mine 😊
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I can imagine deep philosophical conversations over chess in prison. Lovely and thoughtful prose.
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Thanks so much, Lisa ❤
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You’re very welcome, Sunra.
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Brilliant write, Sunra. I love the back and forth and the ideas within. ❤️
We keep writing letters through our posts, right! But the wait for the right kind of response can be too long sometimes.. 🙂
Thanks for joining in. 💖
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Thank you, Punam! ❤ We absolutely do. We're a spiderweb of international pen pals! 😀 Glad you're my pen pal. Thank you too 🙂 x
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You are so welcome, dear pen pal! ❤️In school we were encouraged to write letters and send overseas seeking pen pals. Now the web has brought those pals right into our lives. 😀 So am I, glad to have you as my pen pal. Thank you. 💖
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Ha ha! Yes, me too! I was terrible at replying, I must admit. Thank god for the internet! 😀 ❤
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We never know the journey we will be taken on when we begin a conversation. This one opens my imagination in so many directions. I seem to be more questions than answers these days, but maybe that is exactly where I need to be.
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Absolutely, Susie! I think you’re right. Any conversation, approached with an open mind, is always an opportunity for a learning exchange. Glad this one sparked your imagination 🙂
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Deep and wonderful. I loved how the philosophical conversation drifts in and out of the chess match between two inmates. It’s very creative.
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Thank you so much, Nitin, for your kind words ❤️
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I love this so much–the structure, the movement, the tone, the veracity, the hope… Yes, the world is a bit of a mess, it says, but there’s still goodness to be felt and shared. We need to remember this.
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Thank you so much, Magaly. Your comment is heartwarming 💖
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Really, ice cream in winter is a no-no? The poor souls who must rely on myths as truth to share.
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Susie 🙂
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I, too, could imagine this as a conversation between two guys serving long prison sentences. Maybe for some sort of political demonstration that got out of hand, or some stupid student prank done just to prove that they were clever enough to do it, or driving the getaway car or holding the bag. They’d use their time to think long, deep, if perhaps confused thoughts, educate themselves as best they could out of books, have the sort of long philosophical talks that go on in college dormitories…
Such things happen to bright, well-meaning young people. There’s a left-wing prison reform movement, and a Bible-based Christian one–not congenial with one another but they share some goals. I’ve never felt called to be active in either movement but perhaps some people who read the poems inspired by the prison chess game will feel so called.
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Thank you for your thoughtful comments, Priscilla. I appreciate you stopping by and sharing your insights 🙂
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Nice and fantastic
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Thank you 🙂
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I love the seemingly casual conversation tone in this, Sunra!
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Thanks you, purplepen! 💜
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Thank you!!
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