Your kiss
peppered on the wind
breathtaking
when you give in
. . . so give in.
© N Nazir 2023
Written for Sammi Scribbles Weekend Writing Prompt (Breathtaking, 14 words), and The Sunday Muse (image as shown).
Syzygy, a Crumbling of
Your kiss
peppered on the wind
breathtaking
when you give in
. . . so give in.
© N Nazir 2023
Written for Sammi Scribbles Weekend Writing Prompt (Breathtaking, 14 words), and The Sunday Muse (image as shown).
Sunra Rainz 
I feel your wind … the kiss.
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Thank you, Helen! I love the Muse’s images today. Wish I had more words to play with 🙂
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Let me know if you ever want a word list.
I LOVE Hozier. Now you’ll have me doing a deep dive. “Cherry Wine” is my favorite.
Your poem is beautiful.
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Thank you, Shawna! ❤ Appreciated, my friend 🙂 Feel free to give me a word list any time! Sorry for my late reply, your comment fell in my junk. And I ADORE Hozier, I just can't stop playing his music lately. Just quality. I love Take Me to Church and Work Song.
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Love this! Especially ‘peppered on the wind’. Beautiful!
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Thank you.
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Very nice.
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Thanks, Michael.
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The pause before the last words is simply powerful. I also agree with brittab, “peppered…” is a very cool turn of phrase.
You say you wish you had more words, but you sure do use what you got well, Sunra.
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Appreciated, Michael.
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I enjoyed using the Syzygy earlier, it wouldn’t fit my plans today. You did well with limited word usage.
I came via the link in your comment with Carrie, I left mine there as well. Google’s Blogger is broken. On the Friday Writings as well.
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Thank you, Jim! I’ll check yours out shortly.
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So give in!!!! 🙂
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😂😂
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I love this! Very clever, especially given the word limit!
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Thank you, Peter! 🙂 That’s the tiniest word limit I’ve ever written to and it almost didn’t happen!
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lovely
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Thanks
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love the phrase ‘peppered on the wind ❤
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Thank you, poetisatinta! 🙂
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you are welcome 🙂
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Wonderful!
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Thank you, Bob!
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Delightful!
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Thank you, Keith! 🙂
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Lovely! We both went with a kiss 🙂
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Thank you, Dale! It was the only way to go 🙂
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I agree, Sunra!
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Give in! what a lovely phrase
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Thank you 🙂
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Mmm…your words are breathtaking, Sunra! ❤️
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Thank you, Punam! ❤️ It might be the tiniest poem I’ve ever written, I think 😊
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You are welcome. ❤️ Here’s to more beautiful micro poetry! 👍🏼😊
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💖😅
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Yes! The Kiss! Yes give in! I love this Sunra and the song too!
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Ha ha! Thank you, Carrie! I’m delighted you do, my friend 😊
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Love it!!!!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Such a wonderful poem Nina! How it softly flows to the point of feeling each vivid sensation, the kiss, the wind, the emotion of it … I love it !
I am a huge fan Hozier !!!! ‘From Eden’ is one of my all time favourite songs!
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Ha ha, thank you! Yeah, I love Hozier. I think my favourite song of his is Take Me to Church but I also love Movement.
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Yes! Take me to church, I love it ! Its been awhile since I listened to movement (listening to it now). Glad to have another Hozier fan to chat with 😀 !
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