The past burns away.
The brevity of the moment
sets us free.
*
We were always meant to cross over
you and I, into meaning
into scattering, into journey
and surrender.
We were always meant to melt
into cosmos, you and I,
I could sense your adventure
brimming with intention
into mine.
Come, let’s split
let’s find the parade
the joyous promenade
the ubiquitous celebration
the colours a-screaming
the songs a-shimmering
the dreamscape of belonging
that only exists
at the crossover.
Let’s journey
into the heart of it
like we did
all those lives before.
It is so very lovely
to see you again.
© N Nazir 2022
The first poem was written for Sammi Scribbles Weekend Writing Prompt: Brevity, 12 words, and The Sunday Muse, hosted by Carrie. The poem was not done so I let it have its way 🙂
Beautiful, first three lines are epic, Sunra. ❤️
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Thank you kindly, Jeff! 💖 😊
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You’re welcome, Sunra. Always! 💖😊
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It’s lovely to see you again, too, dear soul. May we cross paths a thousand times more. 💜
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Thank you, K.Hartless! 💖 So glad you could relate 😊
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I love everything about this poem Sunra! A gorgeous rendering of the past into the present. One of your finest my friend!
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Thanks so much, Carrie! Love the images you gave us! 🙂
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Both are nicely done 🙂
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Thank you, Dale! 💖 😊
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This makes me want to get out my backpack. I suppose at some point I’ll get out my spiritual backpack and come back and do this whole thing again. I once visited a sensitive who said i had lived 94 lives. She seemed to think that could not be “but that’s what they’re saying;” (the guides.) She told me about a couple of my past lives and one was where i was this very tall woman (I am tall in this life, too–5′ 11”) and was horribly self-conscious about it and slouched to seem shorter etc. My father married me off to the only man who would have me, and he was a loser but I had a son and was a great mother. The sensitive said I never have to worry about that, that I’d done that and aced it. She said I died of appendicitis because i wouldn’t call the doctor cos I didn’t think I was important enough. Oops.
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How fascinating, Shay!! 💖 I think we contain so many memories and evolution is not just physical but celestial too. It would explain why nostalgia is so powerful sometimes and why deja vu comes upon us often 🌟 💖
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Enduring joyfulness! A delightful poem
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Thank you so much, Keith! 💖 😊
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Well done. I like how you did this, Sunra.
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Thanks so much, Bill 😊
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A rekindled inevitability — wonderful write Sunra. 🙂✌🏼❤️
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Thanks so much, Rob! 💖 😊
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Really beautiful. ❤
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Thanks so much, revived writer! ❤
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I love both of these Sunra. The feeling of freedom in the second poem is marvellous.
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Thanks so much, Marion! ❤
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So very beautiful. You are a poet with the heart and know when to step aside.
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Thank you, Manja ❤ That means a lot x
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I love this, with its intimations of happy memories, and some longing to recapture those times and adventures.
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Thank you, Margaret ❤ I'm so glad. There's definitely longing there 🙂
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This is wonderful, Sunra! Makes me want to pack it in and journey on.
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Thank you so much!! 💖
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Ugh that line about melting into the cosmos… 🤤
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💗I appreciate that, LaShelle, thank you!
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“We were always meant to cross over
you and I, into meaning
into scattering, into journey
and surrender.”
first, that first line, that’s a powerfull way to start a poem, to “cross over”. love the language and the spirit of this poem… that’s exactly how i’ve been feeling lately.
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Thank you so much, Phillip, I’m so glad you vibed with this one. It came out in a flurry and I didn’t change much at all. Appreciated 🙂
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