How did you learn so much about love?
You praise the emptiness as much as the fullness and overflow.
You take me with you to the mountains, the stars you speak of.
Did you wander lonely in the desert for your Beloved?
What form did he take when he arrived?
Did you dance for him?
What honey tongue did he speak in?
Did you weep with relief and kiss the earth
or did you fall on your knees and laugh mad with joy?
You become orb, grow ever-wider as you spin like the celestials.
Perhaps you are with them. Perhaps you are here again.
Would you know how much your words have outlived you?
You span and span, alchemised
joined everything as one
became geometry
crossed thresholds of being.
You alone understood that the broken heart has finally opened
and the wound is only the knowledge it asked for.
© N Nazir 2021
Written for dVerse ~ Poets Pub
Prompt: Write a poem for/about a poet you admire.
*image found on Pinterest, artist unknown
A nice tribute to Rumi. I feel like after reading these poems by everyone I’m going to go on a poetry reading binge.
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Yes, me too! I’d gladly do it though 🙂
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I adore Rumi! You did right by him here, I especially like the last line, “You alone understood that the broken heart has finally opened and the wound is only the knowledge it asked for.”
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Thank you, Tricia! Yes, I felt good about that line too ❤
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I should have said, Tricia, that it was inspired by one his lines which went something like: I’ll keep breaking my heart until it opens. I meant to mention that before. It inspired the whole poem.💛 Anyway, thank you for reading!
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This is amazing writing and it’s a beyond beautiful tribute to Rumi. I have so many poems from dVerse to read right now and including these different poets, especially ones I have admittedly not read much of, I’ll definitely be up all night here lol. As said, brilliant and amazing writing. It’s powerful and moving to me.
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I’ve only just seen your comment, Lucy, sorry for the late reply (it fell into my spam for some reason). Thank you so much for your kind words! It means a lot as I really admire your work ❤ I'm the same, I love being introduced to new poets and I also have a long reading list now. Hope you're well! 🙂
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A great tribute poem. I like how you show the significance of words as they expand and spread way beyond us.
Dwight
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Thank you so much, Dwight! Appreciate your kind comments ☀️ 💛
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You are welcome!
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Ah, Rumi. This is such a good reminder that we should stop acting small. I think he understood just how cosmic our words can be, and you captured that very well. Beautiful image, also.
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Thank you, K. Hartless ☀️💛
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Such a praiseworthy poem words dance delightfully across the page and culminate in that penultimate stanza in a whirl
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Thank you so much, Laura! So kind of you to say 💕☀️
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This is so, so beautiful! Those final lines are profound. I need to read more Rumi…
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Oh thank you, Ingrid! I appreciate your kind comments ☀️ 💛 I now have a reading list after reading everyone else’s poems! 😄
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It’s been a wonderful exercise hasn’t it? 😊
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Definitely. I always have a look and sometimes don’t feel up to the dVerse challenges but after doing NaPoWriMo this year I feel more seasoned! 💛 I look forward to the next one ☀️
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You captured the essence of Rumi ~ Beautifully.
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Thank you, Helen ❤️
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Excellent Sunra! I have a book of Rumi as translated by Coleman Barks — such. Enlightenment.
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Thank you so much for saying so, Rob! ☀️💕
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I love it… so interesting how many different poets I’ve came across in this prompt… none being the same
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Thank you, Bjorn! ☀️💛
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Like Rumi, this piece blooms with wisdom. and oh how beautiful this line is: What form did he take when he arrived?
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Thank you so much for saying so. I appreciate your comments ☀️ 💕
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you’re welcome!
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🌠❤
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💕
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Was just reading some Rumi a few days ago. So I enjoy this poem even more. Always loving your style and your themes. So much goodness here. Liked this:
“You span and span, alchemised
joined everything as one
became geometry
crossed thresholds of being.”
And you really finished this off in a fantastic way!
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Thank you, Ben! ☀️ That’s so kind of you to say 💕 Glad you liked that stanza, I enjoyed writing it!
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You’re welcome! I just love this whole thing entirely. The concept and the way you phrase things … it’s amazing!
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❤️☀️
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These were my favorite lines too! “alchemised” is such a perfect word choice. Such beautiful language. I love this poem!
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Thank you, JYP! I appreciate your lovely feedback! 🙂
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Agreed. It’s wonderfully crafted by, Sunra!
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Hey, thank you, dear Ben! Hope you are well ❤ 🙂
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You’re welcome. And thanks! Doing a little better. 🙂
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☀️👌I’m so glad to hear, Ben. May your weekend get even better 🤗
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Thanks a lot!!! 🙂 Hope you have an incredible weekend as well!
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Thanks Ben! 😄☀️💛
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Welcome! 💛
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Gorgeous poem in which you captured the spirit of Rumi.
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Thank you so much for saying so 🙂
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This… just might be the most beautiful poem I have ever read 💝💝 Sigh 🙂
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Thank you so much, Sanaa 💗 So kind of you to say ☀️💛🌸
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I too am taken with the final couplet, but yes, all of it, spirit and letter – a fine poem ~
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Thank you so much, M☀️ That’s very kind of you to say 🌼
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So beautifully you’ve expressed it.
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Thank you so much, lovelifeandbeyond 💕
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Gorgeous verse. 🌞
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Thank you, Lisa!
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As I read the poem, I imagined how Rumi would feel when he read this tribute to him. He would perhaps experience a new kind of love. 😋😀❤️ lovely work!
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Thank you so much, lubnamaryam! 💖
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